Tuesday, January 31, 2012

Artist: Emil Nolde



You can almost feel the wind blowing the flowers in an Emil Nolde painting. The canvases are alive with vibrancy and turmoil. Emil Nolde was a controversial figure. Born near Nolde, Denmark, Emil Hansen did not feel that farm life was for him. He tried his hand at wood carving, furniture making, and being a drawing instructor. At the age of 31, he found his calling and began to pursue a career in art. When the Munich Academy of Fine Arts turned him down for admission to study, he continued to purse becoming an artist by taking private lessons, visiting Paris, and becoming familiar with the Impressionists movement which was popular at the time. The works of Vincent Van Gogh he found fascinating and he painted many paintings of bold flowers.



Much of his life, Emil Nolde had difficulties with the various groups that he joined. He was briefly a member of the Expressionists group, Die Brucke. In the 1920's he supported the Nazi party and expressed negative opinions about Jewish artists-- a choice that I can only imagine he must have regretted. Nolde's style was very bold. He was known for his expressive choice of colors. Golden yellows and deep reds make luminous otherwise somber tones within his paintings. His watercolors churn and include vivid, brooding storm-scapes and brilliant florals. Because Nolde painted in the modern style his work was labeled degenerate by Hitler and over a thousand of his paintings were removed from museums and galleries. He was forbidden to paint even in private until 1941. Passionate about art, he still painted and hid his works, calling them the "Unpainted Pictures."

In 1942, Nolde wrote a statement that rings very true to me. He wrote: "There is silver blue, sky blue and thunder blue. Every colour holds within it a soul, which makes me happy or repels me, and which acts as a stimulus. To a person who has no art in him, colours are colours, tones tones...and that is all. All their consequences for the human spirit, which range between heaven to hell, just go unnoticed." I remember this statement when I see a Nolde painting.


Monday, January 30, 2012

Six Sentence Story Monday


This evening I found a site titled "The 6S Social Network". It can be found at: http://sixsentences.ning.com/
It is a website with more than 2000 members that allows members to post, read, and comment on six sentence stories. Many of them are alot of fun and many are very well written.

I am very tired tonight so only one six sentence story:

The Dakini of Bliss

Bliss ran her tongue lightly across the bottom edge of her top teeth and gave the hulking man with the brooding dark eyes and worn leather jacket a coquettish glance. He stared right through her. She ran her fingertips through her light hair and returned his gaze. He smiled at her and looked away out the bus window. Malcom had worn such a jacket and memories of the day he tattooed the opening lotus flower with a dancing dakini at the base of her spine because Aidan had said that he would pay for whatever tattoo she chose to have inked upon her skin came live back into Bliss' mind. Fifty years ago her skin had been smooth and clear, she wondered if the figure still danced or was crumpled in a heap of wrinkles.

Sunday, January 29, 2012

Sunday Writing Discussion #5: Naming Characters

Currently I am writing a story that features a main character who is a mechanic. He works on derelict equipment and scavenges parts from defunct machinery. He is a very solid type of character who then begins to experience something remarkable and this causes him to take extraordinary and very out of character action. I can picture him. He's a big guy with muscles earned from lifting engines and moving heavy stuff. He's quiet and clever. The kind of person who is called steady and reliable.

Did I mention that the story is set in the future? A rather dystopic future?

This character's name has been eluding me. In trying to come up with his name however aspects and details of the story are coming more into focus for me. I am getting a feel for the society that he is a part of. I am envisioning who his parents were and what was important to them-- so important that it would influence the naming of their son. This background also influences the character.

On a whole other level, I also have to think about the connotations that a name brings up. This can be an important part of the characterization in a novel. Charles Dickens came up with some of the most memorable names in English literature. The names themselves evoke the essence of the characters. Names like Cornelia Blimber the prim school teacher, Ebenezar Scrooge, Seth Pecksniff the architect and hypocrite, etc. Finding the right name can set who the character is.

If a character is an everyman kind of character, then I try to use names that are not too extraordinary. The list of male names is pretty limited if I am sticking to what are typical names. Popular male names have actually varied very little in the last century. These are names like John, David, Richard, Joseph, Robert, etc. Female names are much more variable. If I am writing a piece set in another time period I google to find out the most popular names of that time period. Jennifer and Ashley actually pretty accurately tells me a woman's age very frequently and if I know her age from there I can often tell what socio-economic class she was born into.

Readers come to characters with all of this type of information loaded into their prior knowledge, whether they consciously know it or not. This information informs how they interpret a character. The connotations of a name influence the concept of a character that readers build in their imagination.

So if I name a character an unusual name this will have connotations also. For instance if I name a character Thaddeus Thistledown an image springs to mind and it isn't one of a used car salesman wearing white patent leather shoes. The name actually comes from a tongue twister and I always pictured him as a tall, gangly, elderly man wearing a tweedy three piece suit and wire rim glasses who has a dandelion pouf of marvelous white hair. Why do I picture him as an elderly man? Perhaps because Thaddeus is a name I associate with my great grandfather's generation and generations before him. Why do I see him with such a headful of white hair? Perhaps because it reminds me of the thistle down that Theophilus Thaddeus Thistledown sifted in the tongue twister.

Even ordinary names have connotations. A book that I like to use to find out the connotations of different names is "The New Baby Name Survey" by Bruce Lansky. To create the book people were surveyed to find out the connotations that they associate with various names. For instance Michael is a common male name. The connotation from the book is: "Like the archangel in the Bible, this Michael is an angel-- for the most part. People describe him as a sweet, caring, loyal, and trusting family man. He's known to be humorous and a good friend. His one downside may be too much ego and not enough patience." The book talks about celebrities that are associated with the names as well. In this way a writer can know and consciously use the connotations associated with a particular name.

In addition to the connotations of a name, the culture and ethnicity of the character needs to be considered. A woman in India in the Victorian era named Mary would be assumed to be British. If the character is Indian she needs an Indian name such as Madri, Ishani, or Gita. A book I use to find such names is "The Writer's Digest Character Naming Sourcebook" by Sherrilyn Kenyon. Names from other cultures also need to be considered for possible connotations that they might bring up outside of their own culture. A friend of mine has been writing a novel and the main character is Senegalese. Because of her ethnicity the character's formal name is Fatima and she is called Fatou. He has been using the name as a placeholder. While no one in Senegal would envision a fat woman from that name, because the naming conventions are different than in the West, readers in the West may not be able to see beyond the first three letters of the name and envision a character who is not fat.

Naming a character is just one step in creating them. There are other things to consider and the character out of necessity for the story may shift and change over the course of writing the story. It is important also to consider who the character is within the context of the story. Too many characters with similar names can confuse readers.

While it is trite in some ways to say it, names do have power. Power to characterize. A writer can consciously use this power or potentially be at its mercy.

I am still thinking on my mechanic's name.

A Writer Has to Eat: Crock Pot Corn Chowder

I have been making many crock pot soups recently. Where I live it is winter and it is very cold so these are a good way to fill up and stay warm as well as being easy to make. The following chowder is very easy to make and tastes yummy on a cold day.


Crock Pot Corn Chowder

Ingredients
1 large acorn squash or one small package of frozen winter squash
2 tablespoons olive oil
1 medium onion, diced
3 carrots, peeled and diced
4 stalks celery, diced
4 vegetarian sausage cut into bits (I use Tofurkey Italian Style sausages. If you don't use these or another type of spicy vegetarian sausage add extra pepper, basil, and fennel)
1 sweet pepper, diced
2 potatoes, diced
1 sweet potato, diced
4 15 ounce cans of cream style corn
32 ounces of vegetable broth
2 tablespoons minced garlic
3 bay leaves
salt and pepper to taste

1. Turn the oven on and preheat it to 375 degrees Fahrenheit. Wash and cut the acorn squash in half. Scoop out the seeds and discard them. Place the squash halves in a pan with water, cover with foil, and bake for 45 minutes or until the flesh of the squash is tender. Scoop out the squash from the rind and place in a food processor to puree or mash by hand until smooth. Measure out 2 cups of puree and set aside. You can also use a package of frozen winter squash if you prefer.



2. Pour the olive oil in a saute or frying pan. Put the onion, carrots, celery, pepper, and sausage bits into the pan and saute until tender and the onions are translucent.

3. Into the crock pot put all 4 cans of cream style corn, the vegetable broth, garlic, bay leaves, potatoes, and sweet potatoes. Stir. Add in the onion, carrot, celery, pepper, and sausage mixture. Add in the 2 cups of acorn squash puree. Stir. Add some salt and pepper. Cover the crock pot and let it cook all day on high.



4. Serve in a bowl with a sprinkling of cheddar cheese on top and enjoy!

Beyond Clunky Time Machines, Gleaming Spaceships, Gimmicky Rayguns, and Slimy Aliens: A List of Recommended Science Fiction Novels


Science fiction has kind of matured alongside technology which is one the themes that the genre is about. There is a plethora of science fiction that can be found in cinema, video games, graphic novels, and books. From the 1970's and onward science fiction has continued to evolve and become more complex, however the perception of it has stagnated and isn't very positive. While there are certainly examples of complex science fiction to found in films and television such as District Nine, Moon, 2001: A Space Odyssey, or Battlestar Galactica, much of it to be found in the movie theaters or on television is escapist entertainment. There is nothing wrong with escapist entertainment if that is what one is looking for, but this kind of science fiction gives the general public the impression that science fiction is for adolescents alone.

Nothing could be farther from the truth. Science fiction is much more than clunky time machines, gleaming spaceships, gimmicky rayguns, and slimy aliens. It is the fiction of ideas.

A number of years ago I remember reading an article where a survey had been done asking people what they liked to read. It ranked various types of fiction, non-fiction, and poetry. Much to my dismay, poetry was last on the list below books about fishing. Science fiction ranked in the bottom third of types of reading material that people enjoyed, well below other types of genre fiction such as mysteries, romance, horror, and action thrillers. The magazine did a follow up article on this and asked several authors and editors to identify science fiction novels that they thought were of merit. The follow-up article suggested that science fiction suffers from a bad reputation.

In my opinion science fiction does suffer from a bad reputation. The kind of reputation that causes avid readers of other types of books to avoid that aisle in the book store. This reputation kind of stems from two very opposing view points. On one head science fiction is uniformly considered to be poorly written-- as in it is the genre about clunky time machines, gleaming spaceships, gimmicky rayguns, and slimy aliens. So to be caught with a science fiction novel in one's hand means that the reader does not go in for challenging reads. On the other hand, science fiction is associated with geeks and nerds. Visions of socially inept Trekkies who cannot get a girlfriend come to mind. There is enough anti-intellectual discrimination floating in the consciousness of the general public that most people would not want to be caught dead with a science fiction novel in their hands lest they get confused with a theoretical physicist, find themselves dumped at Comicon without a costume, and have to fend for themselves.

But here's the thing, people who don't try science fiction are missing out on some of the best reading material available. This isn't to say that the science fiction aisle in the book store isn't laden with Star Wars wannabe space operas and the like, but really any genre has its share of badly written fiction. The point is do not dismiss all of science fiction because of the stuff that is not so hot. There's alot of really disgusting chocolate in the world, just take a sample next Eastertime. Waxy, overly sweet, nasty stuff that does not honor the cocoa bean it came from. Does this mean that all chocolate is bad? No. It just means that you have to know what to look for to really enjoy it.

Here is a list of 20 Science Fiction Novels to look for in the enigmatic Science Fiction Aisle at the bookstore:

1. Ender's Game by Orson Scott Card

2. The Left Hand of Darkness by Ursula LeGuin

3. To Say Nothing of the Dog by Connie Willis

4. Hitchhiker's Guide to the Galaxy by Douglas Adams

5. 1984 by George Orwell

6. Fahrenheit 451 by Ray Bradbury

7. Do Androids Dream of Electric Sheep? by Philip K. Dick

8. The Forever War by Joe Haldeman

9. Neuromancer by William Gibson

10. Hyperion by Dan Simmons

11. A Canticle for Leibowitz by Walter M. Miller

12. Flowers for Algernon by Daniel Keyes

13. Dune by Frank Herbert

14. The Time Machine by H.G. Wells

15. Foundation by Isaac Asimov

16. The Moon is a Harsh Mistress by Robert Heinlein

17. Slaughter House Five by Kurt Vonnegut

18. The Handmaid's Tale by Margaret Atwood

19. The Sparrow by Mary Doria Russell

20. Contact by Carl Sagan

This list is by no means exhaustive (and if you are someone who reads science fiction by all means leave more suggestions of really good science fiction novels in the comments), but if you are someone who considers themselves intelligent, adventuresome, and a trendsetter do yourself a favor and read some of these novels. The effort will be worth it.

Thursday, January 26, 2012

Thursday Writing Prompts: Speculative fiction Sports

I was thinking about sports on other planets this evening and wondering if I could come up with some writing prompts. In honour of the X-Games happening in Aspen, here are some sports related writing prompts:

1. Imagine a world where genetic manipulation is the norm. What would extreme sports look like? What kinds of tests would be conducted on the athletes?

2. What would basketball look like in zero gravity? Describe a game. What would kickboxing look like?

3. What would spaceship racing include? What would be the challenges?

4. Imagine the Olympics on Mars. What accommodations would have to be made? What new events could be added?

5. Imagine a fast action sport that included devices that could manipulate the quantum field and alter game play. Describe such a game and how it would be won or lost.

Have fun with these prompts!

Wednesday, January 25, 2012

Poetry: Van Morrison's Astral Weeks


Van Morrison is a legend in rock and roll. He has received six Grammy Awards, been inducted into the Rock n Roll Hall of Fame, and was inducted into the Songwriter's Hall of Fame. He was born George Ivan Morrison in Northern Ireland and much of his music is both inspired by rhythm and blues and celtic influences. Astral Weeks is a mystical song cycle that is considered to be one of his best works and one of the best albums of all time. It is poetry.

Here is the link to the YouTube video: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=4ech6pZoBJ4

Astral Weeks

If I ventured in the slipstream
Between the viaducts of your dream
Where immobile steel rims crack
And the ditch in the back roads stop
Could you find me?
Would you kiss-a my eyes?
To lay me down
In silence easy
To be born again
To be born again
From the far side of the ocean
If I put the wheels in motion
And I stand with my arms behind me
And I'm pushin' on the door
Could you find me?
Would you kiss-a my eyes?
To lay me down
In silence easy
To be born again
To be born again
There you go
Standin' with the look of avarice
Talkin' to Huddie Ledbetter
Showin' pictures on the wall
Whisperin' in the hall
And pointin' a finger at me
There you go, there you go
Standin' in the sun darlin'
With your arms behind you
And your eyes before
There you go
Takin' good care of your boy
Seein' that he's got clean clothes
Puttin' on his little red shoes
I see you know he's got clean clothes
A-puttin' on his little red shoes
A-pointin' a finger at me
And here I am
Standing in your sad arrest
Trying to do my very best
Lookin' straight at you
Comin' through, darlin'
Yeah, yeah, yeah
If I ventured in the slipstream
Between the viaducts of your dreams
Where immobile steel rims crack
And the ditch in the back roads stop
Could you find me
Would you kiss-a my eyes
Lay me down
In silence easy
To be born again
To be born again
To be born again
In another world
In another world
In another time
Got a home on high
Ain't nothing but a stranger in this world
I'm nothing but a stranger in this world
I got a home on high
In another land
So far away
So far away
Way up in the heaven
Way up in the heaven
Way up in the heaven
Way up in the heaven
In another time
In another place
In another time
In another place
Way up in the heaven
Way up in the heaven
We are goin' up to heaven
We are goin' to heaven
In another time
In another place
In another time
In another place
In another face

Tuesday, January 24, 2012

Artist: John William Waterhouse


I love art and on Tuesdays I take a moment and review an artist's work who I have not looked at in a while. This evening I was thinking about the romantic images of John WIlliam Waterhouse. He was an English painter who worked in the Pre-Raphaelite style even though when he was painting the style had gone out of vogue. He borrowed smidgeons of the ideas from the Impressionists who were his contemporaries and blended this with the techniques of earlier Pre-Raphaelites. He painted primarily women. Ophelia and The Lady of Shallot were favorite subjects. He often depicted women from mythology or the Arthurian romance tales. Many of his paintings are on display in major British art galleries. In my opinion his painting show a love and respect for women. He painted wicked women and women with power in addition to those who died for love. His painting of Cleopatra shows her leaning back with her arms above her head. It is a stance of casual power. Another painting is of Circe who turned Odysseus' men into pigs. One of his depictions is of a witch casting a magic circle. His painting are beautiful and mesmerizing.


Monday, January 23, 2012

A Divergence: Miracle



This evening I am not feeling very well. I came home from work and went to bed and have only gotten up to get soup. So instead of a book review I am going to post an interpretation of the miracle of how the Universe came to be that I wrote this last summer. I tried to be as accurate to scientific theory as I could and still evoke the mystery of how things begin and continue. When I think of this it fills me with awe and makes me grateful to be alive.


Miracle

Within the Prose Edda, the frost giant, Ymir, was created when Muspell the place of heat and light met the cold of Niflheim. From Ymir all things arose. When he was killed by Odin, Vili, and Ve, his blood became the lakes and seas, his hair grew to be the trees, his bones solidified into mountains, and pebbles and rocks were made from his teeth. This belief expresses a miracle.
But miracles are the stuff not of myth and story. They are reality. The natural world is wondrous without embellishment. Miracles are changes, either small and accumulating like lichens upon rocks, or sudden and devastating like lightning. Miracles are chains of events that transform reality and make it anew.



In the beginning the Universe was collapsed into one churning, heavy mass in heated turmoil. All potential writhed within. It heaved a great inward sigh and expelled itself outward. The Universe raced in all directions through the Void that was truly nothing until it blessed the Void with its presence. Over millions of years particles coalesced. Galaxies and quasars began to form after a billion years had passed. As the galaxies stumbled and began to pirouette on their axes, clouds of gas formed. Particles, like miniature worlds collided, fusion began. The suns began to shine. As the stars spun and pulled rings of dust to them, the pieces joined, formed into their own masses. The planets of a billion stars began to be born over billions of years.



So small, so insignificant the earth.

The Universe sped ever afterward, the galaxies spun, the stars fed off the energy of their particles, light danced over clouds of gas, and Earth began somewhere around 9.2 billion years after the initiation of the Universe's great change. Once upon a time our solar system was a hapless nebula rotating in space. For some reason, perhaps the super nova of an older star, the nebula began to contract and formed a proto-planetary disc. But the infant was not to slumber in peace, shock waves and the woggling angular momentum of larger pieces of cosmic flotsam continued to disturb it. The nebula cloud spun faster and faster, cosmic dust fell into its center, gravity pushed upon it. The Sun was born of speed, collision, gravity, and pressure. And there was light.
As the proto-planetary disc differentiated, it created rings. Fragments within the rings collided, joined, and formed bigger objects until over time the proto-planets were formed. They danced in orbit around the Sun and spun on their own axes. Again speed, collision, gravity, and pressure worked together to create the planets.




But the solar system was lifeless. As the Earth rotated faster and faster, the siderophile metals melted into the core. The stratification of the earth's layers began. The Catastrophe of Iron created the magic of the magnetic fields. Gravity allowed the Earth to retain an atmosphere that held water and the magnetic fields offered protection from the radiation of the solar wind.
As all was proceeding, another proto-planet hit the Earth. The mantle was broken and a piece shot off into space. The moon was born. The Earth's initial atmosphere was blown away and it cooled rapidly forming a basaltic crust whose ancient presence is still found at the oceans' floor. Marked forever by this catastrophic birthing of the moon, the Earth sits at a 23.5 degree tilt on its axes. The seasons were created by this accident.



Baby Earth was not at rest. The surface was molten. Meteorites pelted the planet. Volcanoes belched molten lava and steam from its interior. The second atmosphere began to form. Comets and other proto-planets bombarded the Earth and deposited water. As the planet continued to cool, clouds formed. From the clouds came rain. From the rain came the great oceans. The new atmosphere contained water vapor, carbon dioxide, nitrogen, and smaller amounts of other gases. The first continents arose, disintegrated, reformed, were demolished, and formed the cratons. The cratons became the bones that the continents of today grew upon.



No one knows when life began on Earth. Somewhere in this Hadean nightmare, perhaps in hydrothermal vents beneath the Earth's surface, life began. It may have begun and been snuffed out several times. Perhaps life came to Earth from the stars. Perhaps life started as a brew of molecules ignited by a flash of lightning. But life began. It metabolized what it needed to sustain itself, it grew, it reproduced, and it began to adapt.



Life is very resourceful and has a great capacity for persistence and creativity. At first life learned to replicate, then it enclosed itself within a membrane and each reiteration was enclosed within its own membrane. Single cell life was born. The first cells were likely heterotrophs. Cannibals and opportunists, they used all organic material around them as food. As their food supply diminished, some cells evolved a new way to survive in this war of life. These cells used the light from the sun.

The oceans turned green with the by-product oxygen these tiny cells exhaled. Earth's third atmosphere came into existence and the ozone was created. No longer could ultra-violet rays irradiate the earth. Life moved to the surface of the ocean and to the land. But this new atmosphere was toxic to the flourishing life. Some forms burrowed into the mud for protection from the burning oxygen. Some grew together and diversified. Some learned to change a step in the process of photosynthesis and use the oxygen to burn food and make energy. The Great Catastrophe of Oxygen made it possible for more complex life to later evolve and the ozone protected the newly evolving life forms.

At times the Earth was frozen from pole to pole and all the way around its circumference. But between these times of ice, life evolved. Plants, animals, and fungi all split from a common ancestor even when they were still collections of cells. Once the Earth began to experience fewer times of being frozen, life began to diversify and multi-cellular creatures came about. During the Cambrian Age life upon Earth exploded into a variety of creatures. Creatures with shells, skeletons or exoskeletons, and hard body parts left a fossil record of this time of biological diversification. Fish began to swim in the oceans. Another ice age cleared the way for more, new, and better-adapted species. At some point tetrapods evolved from the fish, lifted their heads to breathe air, and became amphibians.



Between the Permian and Triassic periods another Great Extinction took place, but life persevered. It is not known if this die off was because of climate change, a super volcano erupting, or a massive collision. From the straggling remnants of life came the dinosaurs, birds, and later the mammals. The dinosaurs shook the ground of the supercontinent, Pangea, until they became extinct. The Age of Mammals was begun. The earliest mammal was a small rat-like creature that grew and changed and evolved over time into the myriad of mammals upon the planet.

So small, so insignificant are humans.



The Universe is approximately 13.7 billion years old. The Earth is somewhere around 4.5 billion years old. Australopithecus afarensis evolved 4 million years ago in East Africa. They became extinct after 2 million years of wandering the African continent, but not before leaving descendants that became the hominid ancestral line. Homo erectus left signs of being able to control fire 790,000 years ago. Beads were left at the Blombos Caves of South Africa approximately 75,000 years ago. Cave paintings at Chauvet Pont d’Arc appeared 32,000 years ago. Civilization did not begin until 10,000 years ago.

In the life span of the Earth, humans have occupied the planet for an eye blink, but consider the grand series of events that has led up to our time upon the planet. If some happy accident had gone differently, what other species might occupy this world? We are born of a fragile chain of cause and effect. Just as the existence of the dinosaurs was a miracle, our existence is a miracle. Earth keeps on changing and when we have become extinct some other species will inhabit our world. How wondrous is it that we, and all the life on Earth, came from the initial Big Bang of the universe? The Universe holds all potential and is constantly changing. Looking at a chain of daisies delicately wrought by small human hands it is hard to imagine the Universe's explosive beginning when hot and super dense matter was flung in all directions with immense energy. In that origin all miracles were begun.



Remember to look around and see how wondrous everything is.

Sunday, January 22, 2012

Sunday Writing Discussion #4: Which Comes First Character or Plot?

Lately I have been watching on YouTube some of the video segments that were recorded by Martha Alderson, who has been called "the Plot Whisperer." Her blog where you can find links to this series of YouTube videos is: http://plotwhisperer.blogspot.com/

In the first of her videos titled "Dramatic Action Plot," she focuses her discussion on determining a character that the writer wants to write about. The second video in the series furthers this discussion and talks about character flaws. I found this interesting because she is known for discussing plot rather than character development and yet she was advocating starting with a character and developing the plot from there. She talks about that the writer needs to know this character and their goals. In addition the goals cannot simply be goals, but need to be driving passions. So if the character is a mystery detective, it must be that character's driving ambition to solve the case.

In Randy Ingermanson's Snowflake Method for creating fiction his first step is to write out a one sentence description of the story or novel. This sentence is then expanded into a summary paragraph for the second step. Creating characters is a third step. In many ways he starts with plot and then populates the story.

So which approach is better?

I think both methods have merit. Without good characters a story will fall flat. Plots that are unsatisfying or do not contain all the Aristotlian elements of a story are unsatisfying. In my opinion it depends on the story that an author wants to tell. If the story is to be primarily character driven and have as one of its features a primarily internal plot, then I think that starting with developing a character or characters makes the most sense. If the story is to be primarily plot driven, determining what the plot will be and then creating characters that will best carry out that plot is the way to go.

I have two characters who I began thinking about and working on quite awhile ago. I can close my eyes and envision each of them. I can imagine how they speak and how they would respond to certain events. I am very intrigued by these characters. I think they are compelling and I want to do them justice and put them in captivating novels. The plots for both of these characters out of necessity for who they are as characters-- their conflicts, fears, goals, backgrounds, and concerns-- need to be action driven, external plots. I am finding it incredibly difficult to write their stories in part because I started with the characters and the stories for them will be not internal plot driven stories. Perhaps as I gain more skill I will be able to create the stories for these characters. The more that I write and think about things, the more I learn.

Another danger in creating the characters first is that the author could create what are called Mary Sues. Mary Sues are so idealized that they never approach feeling authentic and it feels a little like the author is fantasizing through them. Writing stories is not about making idealized versions of oneself who can never be defeated and always come out smiling. On the contrary on some levels it a little sadistic in that the writer has to really put the characters through a certain amount of hell. A story needs conflict and if the writer likes their characters too much, they will shy off of putting the screws to the characters. If the characters are idealized versions of the author, why would any author inflict torment on themselves even in their fantasies?

Starting with the plot also has pitfalls as well. A writer can write out a pretty logical plot with external action scenes that seem to flow consistently. And then they create the characters for the plot and even if they create those characters specifically for that plot, the internal logic of the characters interacting with the pre-planned external plot may require more thinking and changes. Also if the story is too externally driven it may feel like it does not have either an empathetic main character or an emotional center to the story. I think a great deal of science fiction and action thrillers start with plot and are subsequently populated with characters and sometimes the characters are less than authentic.

Again, I think both methods of developing stories have merits and choosing which will fit the writer's current project makes the most sense. Ultimately in the writing of the story or the novel there will be an interplay between character and plot development and the writer will have to move back and forth and revise things as they go. Both characters and plots are important to make stories work.

A Writer Has to Eat: The World's Best Macaroni and Cheese

Sometimes comfort food is just what is needed. Macaroni and cheese is a simple dish that can be prepared in under an hour. Making macaroni and cheese is really easy and so much better than any of the prepackaged box fare! This recipe has been declared by those who have consumed it to be the World's Best Macaroni and Cheese recipe.



The World's Best Macaroni and Cheese

Ingredients

4 tablespoon of butter
1/4 cup flour
3 cups shredded cheddar cheese (Dubliner is fantastic in this recipe and gouda works as well!)
3 cups milk
2 cups sour cream
1 15 ounce can stewed tomatoes
1 16 ounce package of elbow noodles
non-stick cooking spray

2 cups extra shredded cheese for topping OR bread crumbs

1. Boil 2 quarts of water in a pot. When the water is boiling add the elbow macaroni noodles and cook as directed on the package. When they are tender, drain them and return them to the pot.

2. Melt the butter in the bottom of a sauce pan. When the butter is melted, whisk in the flour. Over medium-high heat continue to whisk the butter and flour mixture. The mixture will go from a golden color to a rich caramel color. It will probably take about 5 to 7 minutes constantly whisking.


3. With the butter-flour mixture still over the heat, add 1/4 cup of milk and stir it in. Next add 1/4 cup of cheese and stir it in. Alternate between the milk and cheese until all three cups of each are mixed in with the butter-flour mixture and you have a smooth cheese sauce.

4. Turn off the heat. Stir in the 2 cups of sour cream and the contents of the can of stewed tomatoes.


5. Pour the sauce over the cooked elbow macaroni. Stir it the mixture until the sauce is evenly distributed.


6. Put the macaroni and cheese in a casserole dish sprayed with non-stick cooking spray. Sprinkle the 2 cups of extra shredded cheese or the bread crumbs on top of the macaroni and cheese.

7. Bake in the oven at 375 degrees Fahrenheit until the topping cheese is melted or the bread crumbs are crunchy-- about 20 minutes.

8. Enjoy!

Saturday, January 21, 2012

Writing Goals

Now that we are past the New Year, I am thinking about what I would like to accomplish over the next year. I feel happiest when I get things done and feel that I have achieved something. Goals are not just amorphous ambitions, they can be the yardstick to measure success as defined by oneself. The more concrete and attainable while still being achievable they are, the better. Further, as I recently read on D. Thomas Minton's blog goals can be set at any time. Often New Year's Resolutions feel like they are made more out of sense of tradition than from honest conviction. If one wants to change, any time is a good time to make that decision and do it. I have also been thinking about how if I just keep making small and steady progress that this can accumulate and add up. So here are my goals from now until January 21, 2013:

1. Keep writing on this blog. Write one post for every day of the year.
2. Write an additional 500 words per day or edit and revise 1000 words. (By the way, that's a cumulative total of 182500 words if I write 500 words per day.)
3. Write at least two stories that exceed 6000 words.
4. Send out 10 stories and try to get them published.
5. Post one recipe per week on this blog because this forces me to take my recipes beyond experimentation and get them in a readable format for my cookbook.
6. Read 12 fiction books.

So what are your writing goals?

Thursday, January 19, 2012

Writing Prompts: Such Sweet Music

Do you write to a particular soundtrack? Is there a type of music that helps you think? All of these writing prompts have to do with music.

1. Your point of view character cannot talk because of a rare medical condition. They can however sing to communicate. Describe a moment where this is a challenge and how they reverse their limitations and turn this medical condition into a triumph.

2. Your point of view character discovers how to create the perfect combination of notes to add in an element to persuade listeners to do their bidding. What does the point of view character do with this skill?

3. All music is banned as being subversive. Your point of view character discovers a music file and plays it. Which music file do they find? What does it inspire? What does the point of view character do?

4. A large ancient horn is found. It is in pristine condition. The archeologists who find it have to blow it. What happens?

5. Your point of view character finds a pin and there are angels dancing and singing on it. What happens next? Can anyone else hear the heavenly music?

Wednesday, January 18, 2012

Poetry: Gwendolyn Brooks


Gwendolyn Brooks was born in 1917 in Topeka, Kansas but she was raised in Chicago. According to the book jacket of "The Essential Gwendolyn Brooks" that was edited by Elizabeth Alexander, Brooks once wrote, "If you wanted a poem, you only had to look out of a window. There was material always, walking or running, fighting or screaming or singing." Brooks' poems capture the life on the streets and the upheavals of her lifetime. She was fearless in her experimentation with various poetic forms and wrote everything from free verse to sonnets. She won the Pulitzer Prize for "Annie Allen" which was published in 1949.

I think most people have read Brooks' poem "We Real Cool." It is often included in high school literature textbooks and poetry anthologies. So I am not going to post it because I listened to a recording on poets.org where she recited "We Real Cool" and said that she wished people would read her other poems. Instead in keeping with that stated wish, I am going to post one of her sonnets, "The Egg Boiler," and another longer poem, "The Sundays of Satin-Legs Smith." Please read these and go forth and find or buy one of the more than twenty books of poetry that she wrote. When she died in December 2000, the world lost a brilliant wordsmith.

THE EGG BOILER
by Gwendolyn Brooks

Being you, you cut your poetry from wood.
The boiling of an egg is heavy art.
You come upon it as an artist should,
With rich-eyed passion, and with straining heart.
We fools, we cut our poems out of air.
Night color, wind soprano, and such stuff.
And sometimes weightlessness is much to bear.
You mock it, though, you name it Not Enough.
The egg, spooned gently to the avid pan,
And left the strick three minute, or the four,
Is your Enough and art for any man.
We fools give courteous ear----then cut some more,
Shaping a gorgeous Nothingness from cloud.
You watch us, eat your egg, and laugh aloud.


The Sundays of Satin-Legs Smith
BY GWENDOLYN BROOKS

Inamoratas, with an approbation,
Bestowed his title. Blessed his inclination.

He wakes, unwinds, elaborately: a cat
Tawny, reluctant, royal. He is fat
And fine this morning. Definite. Reimbursed.

He waits a moment, he designs his reign,
That no performance may be plain or vain.
Then rises in a clear delirium.

He sheds, with his pajamas, shabby days.
And his desertedness, his intricate fear, the
Postponed resentments and the prim precautions.

Now, at his bath, would you deny him lavender
Or take away the power of his pine?
What smelly substitute, heady as wine,
Would you provide? life must be aromatic.
There must be scent, somehow there must be some.
Would you have flowers in his life? suggest
Asters? a Really Good geranium?
A white carnation? would you prescribe a Show
With the cold lilies, formal chrysanthemum
Magnificence, poinsettias, and emphatic
Red of prize roses? might his happiest
Alternative (you muse) be, after all,
A bit of gentle garden in the best
Of taste and straight tradition? Maybe so.
But you forget, or did you ever know,
His heritage of cabbage and pigtails,
Old intimacy with alleys, garbage pails,
Down in the deep (but always beautiful) South
Where roses blush their blithest (it is said)
And sweet magnolias put Chanel to shame.

No! He has not a flower to his name.
Except a feather one, for his lapel.
Apart from that, if he should think of flowers
It is in terms of dandelions or death.
Ah, there is little hope. You might as well—
Unless you care to set the world a-boil
And do a lot of equalizing things,
Remove a little ermine, say, from kings,
Shake hands with paupers and appoint them men,
For instance—certainly you might as well
Leave him his lotion, lavender and oil.

Let us proceed. Let us inspect, together
With his meticulous and serious love,
The innards of this closet. Which is a vault
Whose glory is not diamonds, not pearls,
Not silver plate with just enough dull shine.
But wonder-suits in yellow and in wine,
Sarcastic green and zebra-striped cobalt.
With shoulder padding that is wide
And cocky and determined as his pride;
Ballooning pants that taper off to ends
Scheduled to choke precisely.
Here are hats
Like bright umbrellas; and hysterical ties
Like narrow banners for some gathering war.

People are so in need, in need of help.
People want so much that they do not know.

Below the tinkling trade of little coins
The gold impulse not possible to show
Or spend. Promise piled over and betrayed.

These kneaded limbs receive the kiss of silk.
Then they receive the brave and beautiful
Embrace of some of that equivocal wool.
He looks into his mirror, loves himself—
The neat curve here; the angularity
That is appropriate at just its place;
The technique of a variegated grace.

Here is all his sculpture and his art
And all his architectural design.
Perhaps you would prefer to this a fine
Value of marble, complicated stone.
Would have him think with horror of baroque,
Rococo. You forget and you forget.

He dances down the hotel steps that keep
Remnants of last night’s high life and distress.
As spat-out purchased kisses and spilled beer.
He swallows sunshine with a secret yelp.
Passes to coffee and a roll or two.
Has breakfasted.
Out. Sounds about him smear,
Become a unit. He hears and does not hear
The alarm clock meddling in somebody’s sleep;
Children’s governed Sunday happiness;
The dry tone of a plane; a woman’s oath;
Consumption’s spiritless expectoration;
An indignant robin’s resolute donation
Pinching a track through apathy and din;
Restaurant vendors weeping; and the L
That comes on like a slightly horrible thought.

Pictures, too, as usual, are blurred.
He sees and does not see the broken windows
Hiding their shame with newsprint; little girl
With ribbons decking wornness, little boy
Wearing the trousers with the decentest patch,
To honor Sunday; women on their way
From “service,” temperate holiness arranged
Ably on asking faces; men estranged
From music and from wonder and from joy
But far familiar with the guiding awe
Of foodlessness.
He loiters.
Restaurant vendors
Weep, or out of them rolls a restless glee.
The Lonesome Blues, the Long-lost Blues, I Want A
Big Fat Mama. Down these sore avenues
Comes no Saint-Saëns, no piquant elusive Grieg,
And not Tschaikovsky’s wayward eloquence
And not the shapely tender drift of Brahms.
But could he love them? Since a man must bring
To music what his mother spanked him for
When he was two: bits of forgotten hate,
Devotion: whether or not his mattress hurts:
The little dream his father humored: the thing
His sister did for money: what he ate
For breakfast—and for dinner twenty years
Ago last autumn: all his skipped desserts.

The pasts of his ancestors lean against
Him. Crowd him. Fog out his identity.
Hundreds of hungers mingle with his own,
Hundreds of voices advise so dexterously
He quite considers his reactions his,
Judges he walks most powerfully alone,
That everything is—simply what it is.

But movie-time approaches, time to boo
The hero’s kiss, and boo the heroine
Whose ivory and yellow it is sin
For his eye to eat of. The Mickey Mouse,
However, is for everyone in the house.

Squires his lady to dinner at Joe’s Eats.
His lady alters as to leg and eye,
Thickness and height, such minor points as these,
From Sunday to Sunday. But no matter what
Her name or body positively she’s
In Queen Lace stockings with ambitious heels

That strain to kiss the calves, and vivid shoes
Frontless and backless, Chinese fingernails,
Earrings, three layers of lipstick, intense hat
Dripping with the most voluble of veils.
Her affable extremes are like sweet bombs
About him, whom no middle grace or good
Could gratify. He had no education
In quiet arts of compromise. He would
Not understand your counsels on control, nor
Thank you for your late trouble.
At Joe’s Eats
You get your fish or chicken on meat platters.
With coleslaw, macaroni, candied sweets,
Coffee and apple pie. You go out full.
(The end is—isn’t it?—all that really matters.)

And even and intrepid come
The tender boots of night to home.

Her body is like new brown bread
Under the Woolworth mignonette.
Her body is a honey bowl
Whose waiting honey is deep and hot,
Her body is like summer earth,
Receptive, soft, and absolute ...

Tuesday, January 17, 2012

Artist: Aubrey Vincent Beardsley


Aubrey Vincent Beardsley lived from 1872 until 1898. Because of his untimely demise due to tuberculosis, he has been referred to as the tragic genius of Art Nouveau. His pen and ink drawings that pulled their inspiration from Japanese shunga wood block prints were dynamic in their sense of design. Often his work emphasized the grotesque, the decadent, and the erotic. Some of his work featured enormous genitalia. His most famous erotic artwork was done for a privately printed edition of Aristophanes' "Lysistrata" and for Oscar Wilde's play "Salome". After his conversion to Catholicism he begged his publishers to destroy the "Lysistrata" illustrations and his other erotic works. His publisher ignored his requests.




Beardsley also illustrated many books and magazines. He illustrated a deluxe edition of Sir Thomas Malory's "Le Morte d'Arthur" and worked for such magazines as The Studio and The Savoy. His work influenced the French Symbolists, the Poster art Movement of the 1890s, and many other Art Nouveau artists.

Monday, January 16, 2012

Six Sentence Story Monday


Six sentence stories are a type of writing exercise or micro flash fiction to stretch one's capability to succinctly write a story. The idea is to write a full story in six grammatically correct sentences. I will post another one of mine today. If you would like to try your hand at writing this type of story, you could either leave your story in the comments or you can send it to me for possible publication on The Stars Are Not Made of Fire by emailing me at annette(at)thestarsarenotmadeoffire(dot)com, including the words six sentence story in the subject, and placing your story in the body of the text along with a brief biography or website address for yourself.

Here are a couple six sentence stories from me:

Georgie watched as the gypsy's bejeweled hand turned over the next card laid on the velvet covered table. The Lovers was followed by the Tower and Georgie needed no explanation beyond the picture. She thought of Reginald, his gambling, and the platinum blonde he had said was his personal assistant. She loved the way he glided across the dance floor and how his mustache tickled when they kissed. It had appeared a wonderful match to her despite her hardworking father's misgivings about an aristocrat who never paid the bill at a restaurant. Georgie eyed the diamond on her finger, pulled it off, tucked it into her purse, and left to board one of her father's ocean liners that was to set sail for New York.

Luke stared at the rough beamed ceiling. There had been deep veins of gold in the mountains. He thought about how the blast from a Colt Paterson repeating pistol made you ears ring. When Billy Bob and Wild Oakey had come into town, it had made Luke nervous and he had set up extra watches around the counting house. They must have planned things for just before the train arrived knowing that the counting house would be filled with a treasure. Sheriff Luke Dodson pulled his sticky hand away from his chest with a sickly sucking noise and thought about how cold the grave would be.

Sunday, January 15, 2012

Sunday Writing Discussion #3: All in the Details

Nothing slows a piece of fiction down more than having a lengthy character or scene description plunked into a piece. Also having paragraphs of exposition regarding the fictional world can seem necessary to the author, but pull readers out of the story.

Setting the scene and introducing characters is necessary. Further, if the piece is a fantasy or science fiction story the world may be very exotic and the characters unusual and need to be described. So how does one go about doing this?

First, there are ways to set up the story so that character and world descriptions fit in naturally into the story. One of these might be to have a naive character or a character who is exploring and cataloging the new sights that they are witnessing. In J.K. Rowling's "Harry Potter and the Sorcerer's Stone" Harry serves as the naive character who has come to Hogwarts and knows very little about the wizarding world. As he learns so too does the reader. Another example would be J.R.R. Tolkein's "Lord of the Rings" trilogy in which Frodo is the naive character who is leaving the Shire.

The words in fiction should never get in the way of the story. An economy of words and careful placement of those words that are the best ones to do the job should be strived for. If one can make the words in a story do double or triple duty, all the better. Rather than having lengthy descriptions, thinking about those small details that could be slipped in in my opinion can create this kind of smooth writing.

Let me give a couple of examples.

Story start number one:
Her horse snorted and stamped, Morgana pulled the cloak close about her. The wind ruffled the fur lining of her hood tickling her cheek. Duridan rubbed the pommel of his sword and pulled his horse to a stop. Through the blowing snow, he could see the golden light of a fire through the slits of the shuttered windows. Where there should have been laughter coming from the inn, he heard only a sign swinging and rattling in the night. "Your Majesty, I fear we may need to press on."

Story start number two:
Holding her cloche hat on her head, Ilsa pressed through the crowd. Her heels sank in the soft soil as she rushed past a clown juggling colored balls, a man in a gorilla suit, and six midgets drinking coca-cola. Rupert called after her, "Dearest, it is only for one night. And the lion has no teeth!"

I came up with these two examples off the top of my head. The first could be from a generic fantasy milieu-- the cloak, sword, and use of horses sets this up. It is set in a winter setting. One of the characters is royalty and the two characters could be running from something and trying to find shelter. In the second story, the cloche hat was a type of hat worn in the 1920's. A clown, the gorilla suit, and the midgets all give the idea that perhaps this is set at a circus. The details can set the story without explicitly stating the situation. If I were to write about different establishments and call one a pub and another a saloon, it would get across with those two words that one might be in England and the other in the American west.

I like to write poetry to practice this type of careful word choice. In poetry the words have to convey multiple meanings, have muscle enough to evoke the essence of what the poem is about, and there is no room for extraneous words. As an exercise try to write three versions of a kitchen without explicitly describing the kitchen. For the first one write a poem that evokes the feeling of a kitchen at night. For the second one write the start of a story about two male college flat-mates who are having girls over for dinner. For the third one write the start of a story about a woman who is in culinary school and wishes to be a chef. See how tightly you can write these three versions of a kitchen. All three should be very different. Before you write think about what details would distinguish these three kitchens.

Well-chosen details and the right words can carry description without giving too many words for the reader to trip over.

A Writer Has to Eat: Tomatillos, Mushroom, and Black Bean Chili



This recipe is another one that I make in the crock pot. I like cooking with the crock pot because once I get the ingredients in it I can turn it on and walk away. Also I tend to cook quantities of food that I can re-heat through the week. This chili has a unique flavor that is different from the standard vegetarian chili that I make. The tomatillos (or green tomatoes if you cannot get tomatillos) give it a tangy flavor while the cardamom adds a spicy punch.

Ingredients
1 pound dried black beans
2 tablespoons olive oil or vegetable oil
1/4 cup mustard seeds
1 tablespoon chili powder
2 teaspoons cumin powder or 2 tablespoons freshly chopped cilantro or coriander
1/2 teaspoon cardamom powder
2 tablespoons minced garlic
2 medium onions, diced
2 bell peppers, diced
1 pound mushrooms, sliced
6-8 tomatillos or 2-3 green tomatoes, diced
48 ounces vegetable broth
1 can tomato paste (6 ounce)
other types of peppers or chipotles in adobo
salt to taste

1. Soak the beans overnight in 2 quarts of water and discard the excess water OR boil the beans in the 2 quarts of water for a few minutes, and let them stand in the hot water while you prepare everything else to go into the crock pot, drain them.



2. In a frying pan or dutch oven with a lid pour the olive or vegetable oil. Put the mustard seeds, chili powder, cumin, and cadamom in the oil. Over medium heat and with the lid on the pan cook the spices for a few minutes. Put in the onions and saute them until they become translucent. Put the bell peppers, mushrooms, and tomatillos in the pan. Saute everything for 5 minutes or so until the vegetables' juices sit in the bottom of the pan. Add in the can of tomato paste and stir.



3. Put the beans in the crock pot. Pour the vegetable broth over them. Put the vegetable and spice mixture in the crock pot. Add the minced garlic. Stir everything together.



4. Turn the crock pot on high and let the chili cook all day. Add salt to taste.

You can experiment with which peppers you put into this chili. Chipotles in adobo sauce add a smokey flavour but be careful because they can make the whole chili very spicy. If I put chipotles in I only use 2 peppers out of small cans. Jalapenos and other types of peppers can also be used as can other types of beans. If using different types of peppers, just saute them with the vegetable and spice mix. Be careful when cutting spicy peppers and either wear plastic gloves or wash your hands frequently because the chemical in the peppers that makes them spicy will burn your skin.

This is good with cheese melted on top and a dollop of sour cream.

Enjoy!

Just Do It

I recently read a blog post by Peter Bregman writing for the Harvard Business Review titled "Your Problem Isn't Motivation". In the post he talks about a friend who is trying to get into a routine and work out. The friend is a very self-motivated person who is having a hard time making himself go to the gym and he cannot understand why he cannot muster enough motivation. Bregman points out that his friend's problem is not one of motivation, it is a problem of follow through.

The Nike ads used to address this with "Just Do It."

As Bregman points out motivation is created via thought processes. Motivation comes from thinking about the benefits of doing the activity. It could be working out, writing, or folding laundry and cleaning the house. It could be anything that someone wants to accomplish. Motivation is evident simply in the desire to do the activity. More desire is not going to increase the likelihood of doing the activity. Guilt isn't going to increase motivation either. The case where the person lays in bed and reads or watches television does not mean that the individual has more desire to do those activities than working out, writing, or cleaning the house. Thought processes that make it clear that there is motivation can also sabotage. Thinking can be bad. So, when it is 5 am, I have planned to get up and run, and my brain starts processing and thinking thoughts like "It's cold. I want to stay warm.", I am thinking when I should just be doing. So when it is a beautiful Sunday afternoon and I have planned to write and my brain starts telling me that it would be nice to lay in the sunshine like a cat and read, I am thinking when I should be doing. It does not take much thinking to interrupt plans to do an activity that one is motivated to do.

When starting a new routine for an activity, it takes a while for the habit to get established. I have read in different places that it takes 30 days or 6 weeks for a habit to become routine. Also, habits can be disrupted by changes in overall routine. If one moves or changes jobs, then routine habits have to become re-established. When I lived in Michigan I would get up early in the morning and walk. I did this despite rain, snow, bitter cold (and I really don't like getting cold), or any type of weather. My day felt off if I didn't walk. I moved to Colorado and I live out in the middle of nowhere. I don't feel safe walking in the early morning here and so my routine has been disrupted. I very much miss walking. I dislike running on the treadmill, but it is the only way I can get exercise. I have to stop thinking and just run on the treadmill. Usually if I can just get myself out of bed and started, I will complete my workout.

This also goes for writing. I love writing, but it does take effort. Sometimes my writing will get interrupted by thoughts of "I just want to be lazy," "I owe myself some time off," etc. If I just ignore these thoughts, remind myself that I plan for my breaks, and get my butt in my desk chair, then the writing will happen.

Other things that I do to help make the follow through easier so that I will work out or will get writing accomplished are things like making up a checklist of what writing I want to accomplish or creating a concrete workout plan, making sure that I have everything handy and ready to go for both activities, and rewarding myself when I do get done what I have set out to do.

Now, as for folding the laundry and doing housework....

Thursday, January 12, 2012

White Writing Prompts

In honour of the cold and the white snow, all of these writing prompts this week have to do with the colour white.

1. Your point of view character finds a blank piece of paper. They start to put it in the trash and the word "Help!" mysteriously appears. What do they do? How is the paper capable of having a message on it?

2. A whipped cream pie comes flying at your point of view character and hits them in the side of the face. Who threw the pie? Why? Where did it come from?

3. Your point of view character is trying to walk home in a blinding snow storm. They keep walking and walking. They walk up to a house they think is theirs. Their key won't fit the lock. What happens next?

4. Your point of view character is a space explorer on a far off planet. The mission has scanned some caves and it appears as though the caves may hold life forms. Your point of view character is wearing an orange jumpsuit and enters the caves with a flashlight. Refracted and reflected light bounces off of crystals and everything is calcified. An alien creatures moans in the darkness upon the introduction of light and color. What happens next?

5. A friend of your point of view character accidentally cuts their finger and bleeds white blood. What happens next?

During the holidays a fellow writer that I know named Jo-anne Odell was also posting writing prompts if you want more writing prompts check out her blog at: http://www.jmodell.blogspot.com/2012/01/twelve-drummers-drumming.html

Three Poems: Winter


The wind is howling and very cold this early morning. I cannot warm up. I went looking for poems about winter. I found three from poets who I have never highlighted before. The first poem is "Winter Twilight" by Anne Porter. The second is "Snow Bound (The sun that brief December day) by John Greenleaf Whittier. The third is "Now Winter Nights Enlarge" by Thomas Campion. If you were writing a poem about winter, what would capture the essence of the season for you? Are there additional poems that evoke winter for you?

Winter Twilight
by Anne Porter

On a clear winter's evening
The crescent moon

And the round squirrels' nest
In the bare oak

Are equal planets.

Snow-Bound [The sun that brief December day]
by John Greenleaf Whittier

The sun that brief December day
Rose cheerless over hills of gray,
And, darkly circled, gave at noon
A sadder light than waning moon.
Slow tracing down the thickening sky
Its mute and ominous prophecy,
A portent seeming less than threat,
It sank from sight before it set.
A chill no coat, however stout,
Of homespun stuff could quite shut out,
A hard, dull bitterness of cold,
That checked, mid-vein, the circling race
Of life-blood in the sharpened face,
The coming of the snow-storm told.
The wind blew east: we heard the roar
Of Ocean on his wintry shore,
And felt the strong pulse throbbing there
Beat with low rhythm our inland air.
Meanwhile we did your nightly chores,--
Brought in the wood from out of doors,
Littered the stalls, and from the mows
Raked down the herd's-grass for the cows;
Heard the horse whinnying for his corn;
And, sharply clashing horn on horn,
Impatient down the stanchion rows
The cattle shake their walnut bows;
While, peering from his early perch
Upon the scaffold's pole of birch,
The cock his crested helmet bent
And down his querulous challenge sent.

Unwarmed by any sunset light
The gray day darkened into night,
A night made hoary with the swarm
And whirl-dance of the blinding storm,
As zigzag, wavering to and fro
Crossed and recrossed the wingèd snow:
And ere the early bed-time came
The white drift piled the window-frame,
And through the glass the clothes-line posts
Looked in like tall and sheeted ghosts.

*

As night drew on, and, from the crest
Of wooded knolls that ridged the west,
The sun, a snow-blown traveller, sank
From sight beneath the smothering bank,
We piled, with care, our nightly stack
Of wood against the chimney-back,--
The oaken log, green, huge, and thick,
And on its top the stout back-stick;
The knotty forestick laid apart,
And filled between with curious art
The ragged brush; then, hovering near,
We watched the first red blaze appear,
Heard the sharp crackle, caught the gleam
On whitewashed wall and sagging beam,
Until the old, rude-furnished room
Burst, flower-like, into rosy bloom;
While radiant with a mimic flame
Outside the sparkling drift became,
And through the bare-boughed lilac-tree
Our own warm hearth seemed blazing free.
The crane and pendent trammels showed,
The Turks' heads on the andirons glowed;
While childish fancy, prompt to tell
The meaning of the miracle,
Whispered the old rhyme: "Under the tree,
When fire outdoors burns merrily,
There the witches are making tea."
The moon above the eastern wood
Shone at its full; the hill-range stood
Transfigured in the silver flood,
Its blown snows flashing cold and keen,
Dead white, save where some sharp ravine
Took shadow, or the somber green
Of hemlocks turned to pitchy black
Against the whiteness at their back.
For such a world and such a night
Most fitting that unwarming light,
Which only seemed where'er it fell
To make the coldness visible.

Now Winter Nights Enlarge
by Thomas Campion

Now winter nights enlarge
This number of their hours;
And clouds their storms discharge
Upon the airy towers.
Let now the chimneys blaze
And cups o'erflow with wine,
Let well-tuned words amaze
With harmony divine.
Now yellow waxen lights
Shall wait on honey love
While youthful revels, masques, and courtly sights
Sleep's leaden spells remove.

This time doth well dispense
With lovers' long discourse;
Much speech hath some defense,
Though beauty no remorse.
All do not all things well:
Some measures comely tread,
Some knotted riddles tell,
Some poems smoothly read.
The summer hath his joys,
And winter his delights;
Though love and all his pleasures are but toys
They shorten tedious nights.

Tuesday, January 10, 2012

Artist: Matthew Ritchie


Matthew Ritchie is an ambitious artist. His goal is nothing more than to represent the entire universe and the structures and beliefs that we use to understand and visualize it.

He was born in London and currently lives and works in New York. He received his BFA from Camberwell School of Art in London. He also attended Boston University. He established himself in the contemporary art scene in the early 1990's. His first solo show in New York's Basilico Fine Arts ran from February 18 to March 18, 1995. The series of paintings in that first solo show identified him as an artist who "brought together historically and ideologically different belief systems in an attempt to show their common thread.”

While Ritchie is often identified as a painter, his work extends far beyond painting. He uses metal, paper, computers, mylar, light boxes, short stories, and a variety of different materials. A Ritchie installation might include sculptures, floor-to-wall installations, kiosks set up with his interactive websites, as well as traditional canvas paintings. Even though his work is so expansive, it is centered in drawing. Ritchie scans his drawings into the computer so he can manipulate them by blowing them up, deconstructing them, and/or transforming them into three-dimensional pieces. He digitally makes his images smaller and larger in order to experiment and play with his ideas beyond paper. In an interview with Art: 21, Ritchie explains his drawing process here: “I start with a collection of ideas...and I draw out all these different motifs, and then I lay them on top of each other. So I have piles of semi-transparent drawings all layered on top of each other in my studio and they form a kind of tunnel of information. Out of that, you can pull this form that turns into the sculpture or the painting. It’s literally like pulling the narrative out of overlaying all of the structures. That’s how I end up with this structure. It’s derived from a series of drawings that I scan into the computer and refine through various processes...and send to the sheet-metal shop down the road where it’s cut out of metal and assembled into larger structures which are too big for my studio.”

Ritchie has created an almost indescribable and expansive mythic narrative comprised from scientific information, his own imagination combined with elements from comic books and classic myth, and Judeo-Christian religion, occult practices, and Gnostic traditions. Beyond the first layer of this narrative is a meta-narrative that examines the belief that information is only at the surface level and looks at the limits of human consciousness in comprehending the vastness of the universe.

Ritchie's work has been shown in solo exhibits at the Dallas Museum of Art, the Contemporary Arts Museum in Houston, the Massachusettes Museum of Contemporary Art, the San Francisco Museum of Modern Art, and the Museum of Contemporary Art in North Miami. He was also an invited contributor at the Whitney Biennial in 1997, the Sydney Biennale in 2002, and Bienal de Sao Paulo in 2004.

Art 21 on PBS.org has a wonderful video segment that can be found at: http://www.pbs.org/art21/artists/matthew-ritchie

Monday, January 9, 2012

Book and Movie Review Monday: The Last Werewolf and Sherlock Holmes--A Game of Shadows


Next Monday I will post more six sentence stories. For today I am going to offer my opinions about "The Last Werewolf" by Glen Duncan and the new Sherlock Holmes movie.

The Last Werewolf by Glen Duncan

I recently read somewhere that writing a story or a novel means you have to continuously keep your reader engaged, but in a novel things are a little different. In novels the first page will get the reader to read the second if it is well written. If the reader reads the second page, then they will probably read the first five pages. If the reader reads those five pages, then they will read the next ten. With each successive number of pages the amount of "good-will-and-interest-in-the-book credit" grows and the reader will finish the book if it reasonably well written throughout.

The first four chapters of The Last Werewolf absolutely snap with crisp prose, are packed with ideas, and the plot shows promise of being innovative. The book's premise is that the main point of view character is the last werewolf in existence. It begins to explore what it would mean to the world to have such a creature extinguished, but then shies off in my opinion. The book tentatively edges towards talking about real existential issues, and then devolves as I saw it.

Jake is a werewolf. He smokes, drinks, and has a great deal of sex. Part of this comes with the condition of being a werewolf. A secret agency that hunts supernatural monsters is tracking him after having killed the supposed only other werewolf in existence. No new werewolves seem to have been created in about 200 years so they have been picked off. The book could have done more to address Jake's unique status and situation. As a hunted being he does run and at one point is about to give himself over, but rather than exploring what extinction might mean for a creature of fantasy and what that would mean to the world the book cops out. An honest examination of that theme would have been fearless and far more dangerous than the story that ensued. I don't want to give any plot spoilers, but I will say that to my mind this had the potential to be a brilliant novel and then it went the way of playing safe and turned into an action thriller. Further the last few chapters had a point of view shift so they were told through the voice of a different character and I did not feel they were even well-written. This second point of view character sounded too much like Jake, she was supposed to be a modern day American but her part was told with British idioms, and the last few chapters felt like an add-on because the book needed to come to an end.

Would I recommend to someone else that they read The Last Werewolf? Yes, overall it is an engaging read. I think Glen Duncan has some significant storytelling ability and is an able wordsmith based on the first one third or so of the book. I don't finish books that bore me or are too horribly written to bother with. For me this book just was somewhat of a let-down in the end because the beginning held so much promise. I think I had my hopes higher than I should have had them.

Sherlock Holmes-- A Game of Shadows

I went to see the new Sherlock Holmes movie last Saturday evening. I very much liked the first Sherlock Holmes movie with Robert Downey Jr. playing the enigmatic detective. The first movie had some incredible sequences where the director showed how Sherlock analyzed fight sequences and then followed them through to win fights. It was innovative and a beautiful "show" of how quickly the great detective could problem solve. The second movie also uses some of these sequences and it takes the ability further. I don't want to give any spoilers, but I thought the movie was brilliant in the way that it further showed Sherlock Holmes mental capabilities.

Where the first movie was complete with the end of the movie, this second movie featured Doctor Moriarty. Doctor Moriarty was Sherlock Holmes nemesis. Where Blackwood was certainly corrupt and plotting to take over the world, his ego overrode his plans. Blackwood as a villain was not subtle and in part this made him evident as the villain and his end was inevitable. Moriarty is cunning. He does not put himself to the forefront to dominate the world, he plots and takes over behind the scenes. He manipulates to achieve what he desires. The second movie is expansive and it feels like there are more adventures to come.

In my opinion, Robert Downey Jr. and Jude Law both did a fantastic job portraying the characters of Sherlock Holmes and Doctor Watson. Noomi Rapace, who was last seen in the Steig Larsson movies, demonstrated again that she has a mysterious depth that she brings to her roles. Would I recommend to someone to spend the money for the price of admission to Sherlock Holmes-- A Game of Shadows? Yes. Matter of fact I would like to see it again.